criticism from the bar stool

where did this guy learn to pour
I mean, I don’t think myself one
to kick up dust
or raise a fuss
over a quarter ounce of tequila
but really
three quarters of a shot glass
is like watching three quarters
of a movie
I’ll enjoy what I get
but I will always feel like i was
missing
something
like foreplay
or tapas
or a fast food burger

Published by bernardsbarnes

Writer. Artist. Performer. A little boy dreaming of the stars.

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